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Four, Five, Six, Seven. Me? by ~SoWhoseTheMonster:iconSoWhoseTheMonster:



It touches so softly I and barely feel it. Like a tickle down my spine.
Over under, in and around, up and down.
I made a choice when I chose, and I told them, I told them I couldn’t be more than one.
But here I am, trying to be four or five, sometimes six.
I’m nearing breaking point.
And I need rain. And a walk.
Will you take me?  I’ve been meaning to ask you.
It’s a treat because I just became seven.
I’m sorry? Do I bother you?
Deal with it.
It flutters so softly, and I can’t tell where it goes.
But I know its not here and I’m reaching breaking point.
I made a choice, I told them, and somehow I’m seven.
Why can’t I just be me?
©2008-2010 ~SoWhoseTheMonster
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Wow.

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hmm... this is interesting. it's very different and there's a few different things it could be about....

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i really like this, its powerful.

you win.

I mean really, i love this.

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Wow. okay, its kind of about how i am always trying to please everyone and i dont always have time for myself.
and funny because your signature is from my ex and mine's song...hmm..

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Thank you very much.
I felt awesome when I wrote it haha.


I eat stars...

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You're amazing.

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youre welcome!

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:heart" farewell my black balloon

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JUST DANCE
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you like it?(:

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